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Offline Hawklore

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« on: September 11, 2004, 06:56:38 PM »
Though Men Fell

Though Women Fell

And Soldiers Fell upon the field.

What hit us the hardest

Is when those buildings fell..




-edit- Not to forget the Pentagon or Penyslvania field I just couldn't put those in to my small poem -/edit-
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Trouble no one about their religion;
respect others in their view, and demand that they respect yours.
Love your life, perfect your life, beautify all things in your life." - Chief Tecumseh

Offline ra

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« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2004, 07:05:35 PM »
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Offline Hawklore

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« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2004, 11:08:08 PM »
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"So live your life that the fear of death can never enter your heart.
Trouble no one about their religion;
respect others in their view, and demand that they respect yours.
Love your life, perfect your life, beautify all things in your life." - Chief Tecumseh

Offline Drunky

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« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2004, 11:31:50 PM »
He was giving you a grade.  Like they do in school.
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Offline Maverick

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« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2004, 08:39:07 AM »
Frankly I think the grade was appropriate if not a bit generous. The buildings did not equal the thousands of lives lost.
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A Veteran - whether active duty, retired, national guard or reserve - is someone who, at one point in their life, wrote a check made payable to "The United States of America", for an amount of "up to and including my life."
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« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2004, 09:04:52 AM »
your poem fell because i fell-t there was too many repitions of fell..

fell
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« Reply #6 on: September 12, 2004, 09:48:07 AM »
Are you E.J. Thribb?
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« Reply #7 on: September 12, 2004, 01:23:33 PM »
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your poem fell because i fell-t there was too many repitions of fell..

fell


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« Reply #8 on: September 12, 2004, 01:28:33 PM »
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Originally posted by Hawklore
Though Men Fell

Though Women Fell

And Soldiers Fell upon the field.

What hit us the hardest

Is when those buildings fell..




-edit- Not to forget the Pentagon or Penyslvania field I just couldn't put those in to my small poem -/edit-


well even if some of you guys find it painful at least heres one kid who cares about the real world more than catching the latest episode of "mtv cribs". be happy for that.
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« Reply #9 on: September 12, 2004, 03:00:03 PM »
It was kind of a Haiku, just a bit too long...

:)

D+ to me is Damn Good... :aok

D+ isn't bad for it taking me 2 mins..
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"So live your life that the fear of death can never enter your heart.
Trouble no one about their religion;
respect others in their view, and demand that they respect yours.
Love your life, perfect your life, beautify all things in your life." - Chief Tecumseh

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« Reply #10 on: September 12, 2004, 09:27:16 PM »
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« Reply #11 on: September 12, 2004, 09:33:13 PM »
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