Lot better.
Just need to dirty it up a bit.
Just noticed - the gun streaks are wrong, your placement puts them somewhere to close to being an 'e' wing (4x20mm cannons). Spit 5s were mostly 'b' or 'c' wings. Put the gun streaks in the same positions you see when you fire the guns offline in external view.
Tip - Hope your using layers, if so set the layers that have the stars and sqn codes to 90%, takes away the bright 'newness'.
Well you got me rekindled on the other one I started lol.
Enlarged star on wing (was too small), changed codes, added "Lady Ellen III"
2 Probs -
1) Star is on both lower wings (mirroring)
2) The white panel on nose where groundcrew were listed. If included is on both sides, but on far side is small.