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Offline B@tfinkV

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« Reply #45 on: February 11, 2006, 12:07:27 AM »
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« Reply #46 on: February 11, 2006, 12:18:01 AM »
I didn't know Coach was a girl.

Oh wai.......


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(did I say that out loud?)




:)  Nice to see ya again, Coach

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« Reply #47 on: February 11, 2006, 01:07:19 AM »
Best parts...bomber losin wingtip...and Heed your call to glory sounds good.

~AoM~

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« Reply #48 on: February 11, 2006, 01:45:32 AM »
agreed filth, best commercial yet... we should have fresh meat in the MA soon!  BTW the editor deserves a beer.
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« Reply #49 on: February 11, 2006, 03:21:57 AM »
Good job Waffle and Coach. Overall, far superior than what was around before.

Can I offer some constructive input?

1. The 'www.' in the URL isn't necessary or desirable. I know you know this, but the site gets resolved without the http://www. and it distracts the viewer during the short time it's visible, since they are checking for unusual spellings or hyphens that may differ from the audio one.

2. There's probably about double the copy in the narration than there needs to be, which dilutes the message and competes with the visuals insteads of enhances them. If you show it to someone (who knows nothing about the game) once and ask them what they remembered, they might say URL, "over 70 something..." and "Uhhh, I can't remember..."

Three main points could be emphasized better with greater retention.

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« Reply #50 on: February 11, 2006, 05:03:26 AM »
Very nice job:aok

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« Reply #51 on: February 11, 2006, 07:35:33 AM »
i dont like it

B/W scenes does not make this scene  looks vintage , just B/W .
Thats kill great look of B24 skin.
P51 gunsight pointing  at FW190 does not make logical sense for me after showing formation of bombers and FW190 starting attack.
Looks like lack of idea how to show escort engaging attackers.
Imo scenes should be /need to be in diferent order
External view of P51 B/W roll looks like patch in to whole movie and kill oryginal Waffle ad idea.

I dont like voice over in whole ad, to much information as for so short commercial. Sounds more like ad of carpet store i hear every day in radio while drive to work or one of super weight loss commercial on TV.

Static AH logo at end looks just static, crack on the screen looks nice and have nice timing but AH logo looks flat.
Is not masked right in som areas (i can see  not smooth edges)
Please add lens flare, spot light  or anything for logo to make it more 3D. Even moving drop shadow will looks betterthen nothing. Not as good as bf109 on oryginal Waffle ad but allways better.
One more, in place where rolling pony fade out screen with AH logo should fade in slower  and start a little bit earlier, imo. Now its looks like AH end screen comes from nowhere

just my .02$

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« Reply #52 on: February 11, 2006, 10:13:21 AM »
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Originally posted by mussie
I meant to say that the Narration by Coach sounded really professional...
The sort of stuff you see at in a movie trailer
I was just waiting for the line's  

"He was a pilot in the virtual sky's"
"She was a house wife"
"Together they are Sky Captain and Wife ACK, Coming soon to a theatre near you"


Nice work Coach


In real life Coach sounds like a squeaky voiced 12 year old :rofl

Actually, Coach has done a LOT of voice-over work. Not to mention a professional singer.

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« Reply #53 on: February 11, 2006, 03:51:07 PM »
Hey Rolex

Although I see you point about the www I think removing it would cause more problems than its worth......

With the novice user making things simpler usually makes it more complicated......

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« Reply #54 on: February 12, 2006, 06:48:47 PM »
Looked OK, but not much there to grab the attention.
Rock:  Ya see that Ensign, lighting the cigarette?
Powell: Yes Rock.
Rock: Well that's where I got it, he's my son.
Powell: Really Rock, well I'd like to meet him.
Rock:  No ya wouldn't.

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« Reply #55 on: February 12, 2006, 08:04:59 PM »
All i can says is it blows the old Commerical AWAY, Made me get a woody from hell :O

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« Reply #56 on: February 12, 2006, 08:15:14 PM »
was just wondering if anyone was going to make a comercial showing the true main areana????

  with vulching alt monkey hords of gang banging HO dweebs, this way people know the true product :D


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« Reply #57 on: February 12, 2006, 09:54:31 PM »
does anyone else notice the tint of the commercial, would be kinda neat to actually have that in AH to depict somewhat nasty weather.
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