Good job Waffle and Coach. Overall, far superior than what was around before.
Can I offer some constructive input?
1. The 'www.' in the URL isn't necessary or desirable. I know you know this, but the site gets resolved without the
http://www. and it distracts the viewer during the short time it's visible, since they are checking for unusual spellings or hyphens that may differ from the audio one.
2. There's probably about double the copy in the narration than there needs to be, which dilutes the message and competes with the visuals insteads of enhances them. If you show it to someone (who knows nothing about the game) once and ask them what they remembered, they might say URL, "over 70 something..." and "Uhhh, I can't remember..."
Three main points could be emphasized better with greater retention.