Hmm.. after having played guitar, bass, drums, dabbling with piano, violins, and even my Chinese instruments, covering rock to death metal to emo to funk to classical and even country; i'm sorry, but I think your playing is simple and decent (guitar) but your vocals are laughable.
It sounds as if you are trying to hard to be someone else (vocal wise). Maybe you could try to find a better musical style to fit -=your=- voice.
Also..
I know you're trying to do some sort of parody thing or just trying to be a sort of jackoscar musically, but seriously, try to find -=your=- voice / style more and make some serious music.
