Rough draft of my son's Football digital montage artwork

[Ripsnort]

Originally posted by Gh0stFT
Ripsnort, some suggestions,
the first pic:

the middle part (boy#2, boy#5) have a complete different gras
then the other pics around, this makes the whole picture less "quiet",
to much disturbing, the green on all pics should be the same style (color),
(thats why BW shootings are much easer
I would also do a less feather around each boy-picture, the helmet at
background picture #5 should be more clearer (visible) at the edge. and you
should edit the boy#4 to look like he is runnung around it or at least
close, both should have similar Focus to the helmet one.

the second pic:
change this whole picture into Black & white,
what do you see? boy#2 have this darking around him, it doesent
fit compared the boys #1 and #3, change this.
The Background goal picture should not be visible that much at
some parts of the picture, it lets look boy#7 look like a dwarf compared
to the others in combination with the visible background.
And the right part of the background goal post looks like an photo error,
remove it or show it, this transparent thing is nothing.

ok thats all from me

R
Gh0stFT

Wow! Thanks for the feedback! I did not know we had so many artists on this web! Do you have something I could look at that you've done that I could possibly learn from? I think a picture speaks a thousand words. Thanks! I'm still learning...this was my first one! (my business partner has been making them all, I just shoot the pictures...)

[Reschke]

Yes we split our kids up this year in the 105lb group.  We have 57 kids sign up so we went with one team that wanted to stick together and another team of a large group of first year players and kids that were coming back to play after being out for one or two seasons.  They ended up going 3-5 but could have easily gone 5-3.

[Gh0stFT]

Ripsnort, i do so many thing here, the last years mainly package design for the daily use,
for me thats not art, it just have to let people buy it, if possible alot ;)
But if you have questions just ask me pm. One more thing,
picture 2, the boy#4, the person behind him is a half face thing,
also the person behind boy#8 thats a No No in photography, remove
it or use a different photo.

[ByeBye]

Originally posted by Ripsnort
Wow! Thanks for the feedback! I did not know we had so many artists on this web! Do you have something I could look at that you've done that I could possibly learn from? I think a picture speaks a thousand words. Thanks! I'm still learning...this was my first one! (my business partner has been making them all, I just shoot the pictures...)

Kinda touchy, lol. You asked for opinons dumb arse.

[ByeBye]

The "Gordon" picture needs a different font. The one you used can hardly be seen. Other than that, I don't like the pictures or the montage and I would not buy a copy of either of those.

[Nilsen]

Cool montage "Brian"

[Ripsnort]

Originally posted by ByeBye
Kinda touchy, lol. You asked for opinons dumb arse.

Touchy? I wanted his professional opinion, and samples if possible.  Why are you always so angry?

Ghostft, thanks! Will PM you when questions arise.  You're correct about the half face, didn't even notice it! I'll ask her to be more careful next time.