Request for a *gulp* Spit...

[rogerdee]

ill have a go although it wont be as good as a kev or greebo skin

[rogerdee]

pictures look blured for some reason or is it too much beer

i done a little got a lot more too do.
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please be gentle with your coments i am still a little fragile:rolleyes:

[Krusty]

The noseart if very blurry. Can you make it sharper, by any chance?

You have problems where the camo lines don't match up going from one side of the fuselage to the nose, and back to the other side of the fuselage. The nose is out of alignment and doesn't have the same blur given to the border between colors (is crisp)

Trailing edge of the port wing has traces of yellow on it. The leading edge yellow stripes don't seem very uniform. I don't know if this was intentional or not. I always assumed they were well-placed and smoothly applied.

The rudder camouflage should be an extension of the tail camo, but the lines are broken and don't match up.

The port/starboard should wrap to each other over the top. I don't have a good top-down view but I can see on one side the green comes up at the top of the star and on the other there's no green for a long stretch back towards the tail.

Where did you get the camo pattern from? I'm not the one to ask for a definitive answer, but it doesn't look right to me (specifically regarding the starboard wing and the rear stabilizer/fuselage area.

All in all not bad, but some of the details need to be checked

[rogerdee]

on the rudder area  the tail fin flash is painted over with green to losse the RAF markings also on the starboard wing it should sow where the roundel has been painted out but i havent done that yet.

 i know the camo is still out of line but thats just   a fiddle bit to do ont the list of too do.

the nose art should be clear i must have hit the wrong button.

Too much beer and wine and too many buttons dont really go togeather