Criticisms: Check your zoom in the first cockpit shot. Youre zoomed too far out, and its not doing that proppeler any justice. It looks as small as an Fw-190s!
For historical accuracy, that isnt the propper gunsight for a Bf-109E. That is, I believe, a Gustav-series sight.
At the 1:20 point, you jump so much (Between camera shots) I cannot tell WTF is going on.
Shoulda watched that F6F fall a bit longer, maybe hit the water.
Same for what I believe is a Typhoon.
And the P-40 after that. It just kinda fades to nothing. What happened to it? And who is exploding right afterwards?
You GOTTA practice those landings. I thought I was gonna cry.
And, in the end, when you start rolling the credits, something a bit less dramatic would be nice. I was watching 'Old School German Iron' again recently, and when he was landing his Bf-109, he rolled 'Learning to Fly'. That was a GREAT choice of song, perhaps you should find something like that? Something that says 'Victory', as well as a nice dinner back at the O' Club. If you want, I have some selections you might find useful, both vocal and instrumental. (Sorry, I design my movies around a song(s), so im real nit-picky when it comes to music)
Complements LOVE the scene attacking those Bostons
Great shot of the P-40 buying the farm
LOVE the song
Nice shot of the P-40E losing both her wings.
Great job flying without that engine.
WTFG on that flying! Its great to see someone else in an Emil!
Over all, 
