Gonna be a bit pickier too.
Looking closer at your screenshots. The rudder was not yellow at that point. While the black ETO band was on the tail the rudders were silver. When they went to squadron color rudders the ID band came off.
Your ETO bands on the horizontal tail look a tad thin and too far out on the tail.
And finally it appears your yellow and black checks are too big and not enough.
Look at this shot of the nose of 353rd CO Glen Duncan's bird. You can count the number of squares and where they fit on the nose for the first three rows.
Also note how the black stripes fit on the spinner a bit differently then yours
The CO's kite tended to be the most by the book with markings.
