In my opinion (and this is only mine), the "ribs" on the control surfaces are far too prominent. Also, look at the port horizontal stabilizer's leading edge. On the starboard side you can see the panel line following the leading edge, but on the port side it runs off into the edge and looks like it's slightly mis-placed.
I almost liked the version 1 weathering better (more splotches) but the version 2 weathering is definitely more refined. Overall I think it looks pretty good. I'd ask one of the spit experts to sign off any all the details (codes, details, placements thereof, etc).
Any pics of the undersides?