I would say the same thing as stang, just say it differently. I also developed my swing with the same extend, turn and coil concept. The less moving parts, the better, especially on iron shots.
I said little swing, Redtop, because it's not a big swing yet with long extension. That head dip and forward slide in front of the ball at impact came by adjusting to stop a hook? It leads you to hit some blocked shots once in a while, I suppose. Would need to see some shots down the line, though. I'm sure your hand-eye coordination is keeping it in check, but less motion would be nice to see. Things collapse a little on the downswing instead of extending.
Man, I would love to see you keep that head a little higher and locked throughout the swing. It would let you extend more down the line, making you more consistent in direction, and your distance with irons would be more precise and repeatable, time after time. Lot of moving parts there to keep in check.
Takeaway could be a little longer. I know I'm harping on extension, but that's the difference with a "tour quality" swing. When your club is horizontal during your takeaway, the toe of the club should be straight vertical and your wrists should not be hinging yet. If you laid a club on the ground along your toes, then another club extended off it toward your right, your shaft should appear to be directly over the shaft on the ground when it's horizontal during the takeaway. Then begin your wrist hinge as you turn your back to the target and get the club to the top.
From your address position, take the club back until the shaft is horizontal, stop and check that position. If it's not right, put the club in the right position (directly over the club on the ground, toe pointed straight up) then turn your head back to the proper position so you can feel that position without looking at it. Repeat that over and over (forever) until you can hit that position every time. It's the same for all the sticks in your bag.
Great rhythm. I like your hands at release and follow through, but longer down the line with a longer extension would be sweet.
Nice pink shirt, too.
