Nice work Claw!

One thing I try not to do while in the film viewer is moving the view sliders around while recording a shot... Best thing to do is set up the angle of the shot first (Everything you want in frame), and record it. Then take a second angle if it didn't come out right... It's a tedious process to say the least, but the quality of film direction is way better... Also the credits are nice, but more action the better, as most here would probably agree.
Nice music choice, and I didn't mind the vox. It didn't seem too loud on my end, and adds dimention to the film...
It only gets more addictive from here on out, so keep up the good work!

Mathis