Author Topic: 613th Recruitment  (Read 547 times)

Offline wooly15

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« Last Edit: November 03, 2008, 10:17:02 AM by wooly15 »

Offline Denholm

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Re: 613th Recruitment
« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2008, 10:06:32 AM »
You should consider removing the possibly offending language from the screen shot.
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Offline 1pLUs44

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Re: 613th Recruitment
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2008, 04:13:39 PM »
Why? I thought it was pretty good :salute
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Re: 613th Recruitment
« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2008, 06:12:57 PM »
the part with the bombers and spitfire escorts dragged on, for i thought, much to long, and didnt really show much emphasis on how the squad does more than air supority, i would have split it half and half, and get a little fighter action in there. just my 0.02,  :salute
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Re: 613th Recruitment
« Reply #4 on: November 05, 2008, 09:02:36 AM »
Why? I thought it was pretty good :salute
Wooly already took my suggestion. He had a screen shot posted here with what could be considered a profane word. Typically that will invite a thread lock, therefore I suggested he remove it, which he did.
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