Good read, here's some constructive criticism / comments. If this is an essay for a university class, make sure to reference everything. And I mean everything. And wiki isn't a proper source.
Also, the Russians had fewer resources than the Germans they were able to produce vehicles more efficiently and vehicles that were lower maintenance
The soviet logistics relied heavily on the lend-lease trucks. Their own trucks were generally good for as long until the first tank of gas ran out.
Towards the end of the war, the germans were critically low on strategic materials (metal alloys etc), whereas the soviets had just had their industry kick started and up to increasing speed.
These reasons as well as poor tactics on the part of the Germans and good tactics on the part of the Russians lead to a Soviet victory on the eastern front.
Generally, I'd consider the germans to have had superior tactics, but they were just simply overrun by the superior numbers as the war progressed. It was the germans' strategy that was pretty much doomed from the start. They woke up a sleeping giant.
push back the Germans in the winter of 1941
IIRC, the germans advanced at all fronts up until the end of 1942. In the beginning of 1942, the soviet troops were pretty much clobbered up from the arctic ocean all the way down to the black sea. They didnt have a chance to push the germans back. However, the winter stopped the germans as they were ill prepared for the harsh conditions, as you point out.
smaller, lighter tanks such as the T-34 and T-75
T-34 is a medium tank. Whats a T-75?
The Russians were in fact producing around 3 times the tanks and 10,000 more aircraft a year than the Germans after 1941
Put the number into perspective, 10.000 compared to what?
This year long attack took back most of what the Germans had taken in the summer of 1941.
Lots of text with just days of the month mentioned.... What year?
In the end their ordeal was over when the Russian army came in and liberated them in 1943.
I would be
VERY careful with the term "liberation". In many cases the soviets were worse than the germans. I'm sure you're familiar with the state of things in eastern europe after WW2...
And check the grammar please.
Please note that I havent referenced any of these comments, so take them with a grain of salt.
Camo
<edit>Just noticed that the text is already submitted. So please ignore my comments.
Like Nef said, good read, I hope you get a good grade!
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