Gotta give a little cc -- Overall was a good job.
The quality was a bit low, I watched the HD version, but still saw lots of jaggies. Perhaps Bump up your AA in your Vid card settings before filming, that should help lots. (Maybe it's just youtube though)
The Music was great, nice pieces used. The Vox was something I really think makes it more real, nice job.
I didn't really follow what was going on for the first few minutes, and lost interest quickly. Perhaps some narration would be helpful in keeping the viewer encapsulated with the film.
When making a movie-like AH film, be sure to turn off Icons; Just makes it a little more real.
You had some great film shots/angles. Little on the long side, IMO... Nice job Wraith, and thanks for sharing with the community.
Mathis