The effect you're trying to recreate comes from, "up close and personal" footage. First of all, switch off the icons (detracts from the footage). Next I wouldn't track the plane(s) because it moves the camera at the point of, "up close and personal." So you will have to place the camera in a static or slightly moving position at the point where the plane gets destroyed. And remember, don't be afraid to zoom in (more quality and detail as opposed to being zoomed out).
Keep playing with it and you will amaze us.
Thanks for the response.

I understand about the icons, but this is a demo reel of the camera angle. I kept them in so I'd be able to visualize the scene better in my mind. When/If I make a high quality film with such angles, I'll be sure to turn icons off.

About turning off tracking: yes I see what you're saying. With no tracking, you will have a still shot just as everything gets "in your face".
On the other hand, I wanted something that would actually give a sense of the movement, and that is why I kept the tracking. It is a compromise between "seeing the fight" and "getting up close".
Again, for a "full production", I would probably splice in other segments of film to give that sense of the fight evolving rather than using a tracking shot. That way, there would be no compromise between the two elements. Naturally, that would require a LOT more work. I made this thing over the course of about 2 hours.
Regarding zoom: naturally

. This goes hand in hand with cuts to different cameras.