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Offline Biggles

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Black Crosses
« on: July 24, 2003, 06:45:27 PM »


My new tune, with flying theme (sort of):

Black Crosses

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« Last Edit: July 24, 2003, 06:51:08 PM by Biggles »

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« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2003, 10:12:03 PM »
what are you using for drums (V-DRUMS?), sound realistic but definately not real. The song sounded kind of Pink Floyd, but wasn't bad.

still listening :)

my opinion: lower main guitar in mix a little (especially after break) and up/clarify vocals a little .

not bad though
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Offline Biggles

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« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2003, 12:19:12 AM »
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Originally posted by NUKE
what are you using for drums (V-DRUMS?), sound realistic but definately not real. The song sounded kind of Pink Floyd, but wasn't bad.

still listening :)

my opinion: lower main guitar in mix a little (especially after break) and up/clarify vocals a little .

not bad though


Appreciate the feedback. For drums, I'm using dr-008 and the "drums from hell" set of sounds, although I usually use an Alesis SR-16.

If I were to mix it again I'd back off some of the effects on the vocals, which would clear them up a bit. I was experimenting. I recorded each word of the first vocal section to a different key (a whole octave, or 12 words), then created a soundfonts file out of that, and actually "sung" that section by playing a keyboard routed to a softsynth loaded with the soundfont, one key for each word of the lyrics. The second vocal section is sung the usual way. :)

Thanks for listening
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« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2003, 08:18:21 AM »
Lyrics sound a bit like free-thought "whatever pops into my head is a lyric".

Its hard to form "intercept" and "formation" to the beat.  Maybe stretch them out over several beats, like a bird's wing.