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Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Ack-Ack on August 17, 2004, 08:45:36 PM
A scientific essay on El Niņo,  please discuss amongst yourselves.


El Niņo, A Comprehensive Study in Weather Patterns (http://douglas.min.net/essay/essay1.gif)




ack-ack
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Lizking on August 17, 2004, 08:52:05 PM
Typical "b" level essay from a public school.
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Gunslinger on August 17, 2004, 08:55:55 PM
"like all things spanish, it is dangerous."

that's funny ackack:rofl
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Ack-Ack on August 17, 2004, 09:07:04 PM
Quote
Originally posted by Lizking
Typical "b" level essay from a public school.



You really want to see a "B" level essay?


The Biography of Walt Whitman (http://douglas.min.net/essay/newessay.jpg)


Pay special attention to the teacher's comments on the bottom of the paper after you read the essay.


ack-ack
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: AWMac on August 17, 2004, 09:11:49 PM
I've had worse Enchiladas...

:eek:
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: vorticon on August 17, 2004, 09:19:11 PM
LOL...
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: United on August 17, 2004, 09:29:40 PM
:rofl The best part is that the kid who wrote the second essay is in honors english.
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Lizking on August 17, 2004, 10:00:49 PM
Not bad, he made a couple of technical errors, but I would give that a real B, at least, for Writing Skills.  However, for content, I would give him an "(A)" but he would have still have to do a real bio on a poet to get it.
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Gunslinger on August 17, 2004, 10:15:15 PM
you guys are easy.  He gets a b for making me laught but as far as a paper goes this is a D- only if it meets the minimum word requirements.
Title: Fear Hell Niņo!
Post by: Saurdaukar on August 18, 2004, 12:17:01 AM
:lol