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Title: 9/11
Post by: Hawklore on September 11, 2004, 06:56:38 PM

Though Men Fell

Though Women Fell

And Soldiers Fell upon the field.

What hit us the hardest

Is when those buildings fell..




-edit- Not to forget the Pentagon or Penyslvania field I just couldn't put those in to my small poem -/edit-

Title: 9/11
Post by: ra on September 11, 2004, 07:05:35 PM

D+

Title: 9/11
Post by: Hawklore on September 11, 2004, 11:08:08 PM

Quote

Originally posted by ra
D+

:confused:

Title: 9/11
Post by: Drunky on September 11, 2004, 11:31:50 PM

He was giving you a grade.  Like they do in school.

Title: 9/11
Post by: Maverick on September 12, 2004, 08:39:07 AM

Frankly I think the grade was appropriate if not a bit generous. The buildings did not equal the thousands of lives lost.

Title: 9/11
Post by: Furball on September 12, 2004, 09:04:52 AM

your poem fell because i fell-t there was too many repitions of fell..

fell

Title: 9/11
Post by: Dowding on September 12, 2004, 09:48:07 AM

Are you E.J. Thribb?

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Post by: hawker238 on September 12, 2004, 01:23:33 PM

Quote

Originally posted by Furball
your poem fell because i fell-t there was too many repitions of fell..

fell

LOL

Title: Re: 9/11
Post by: anonymous on September 12, 2004, 01:28:33 PM

Quote

Originally posted by Hawklore
Though Men Fell

Though Women Fell

And Soldiers Fell upon the field.

What hit us the hardest

Is when those buildings fell..




-edit- Not to forget the Pentagon or Penyslvania field I just couldn't put those in to my small poem -/edit-

well even if some of you guys find it painful at least heres one kid who cares about the real world more than catching the latest episode of "mtv cribs". be happy for that.

Title: 9/11
Post by: Hawklore on September 12, 2004, 03:00:03 PM

It was kind of a Haiku, just a bit too long...

:)

D+ to me is Damn Good... :aok

D+ isn't bad for it taking me 2 mins..

Title: 9/11
Post by: SunTracker on September 12, 2004, 09:27:16 PM

F minus

Title: 9/11
Post by: B17Skull12 on September 12, 2004, 09:33:13 PM

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