Aces High Bulletin Board
General Forums => Films and Screenshots => Topic started by: mamba2 on September 01, 2006, 01:54:43 PM
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http://media.putfile.com/1st-Aces-High-Video
Plz comments are needed...
NOTE: This is my 1st film made..... plz make comments and suggestions.
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Liked it, but a few suggestions-
1) Turn off icons. A whole lot of unreadable screen clutter.
2) Go into your fraps settings and turn off the cursor. Very distracting.
3) Less in-cockpit view (very shaky), more external or chase view. Especially chase view. Makes the plane look more lively and mobile when it seems to be moving a few seconds ahead of the chase camera.
4) Try to tell a story, or at least explain what kind of footage the film is made from. I spent at least 2 minutes waiting for you to shoot something before I realised it was an Air Race. :)
5) Have more footage in "zoom" view, until you did I couldn't tell that the planes in front of you were Hellcats too.
6) Larger screen. Very hard to see.
7) Try to sync up the film with the music a bit more. Was fun to watch, but its more entertaining (at least to me) when its more like a music video than a video with music.
Pretty good first try, I liked it :aok
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Thank You for ur comments..... I just made my 2nd film and it will be on the forums in about 30 mins...... I will make changes using ur suggestions on my 3rd film, coming out in the next couple of days.
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liked it mamba