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Title: Wow, this is good
Post by: angelsandair on April 02, 2008, 11:18:01 PM
http://s253.photobucket.com/albums/hh71/1pLUs44/?action=view&current=SavingPrivateRyan.flv

Check out the video I made. (it may as well be a preview, I threw it together in about an hour only using half the song)

Give me some feedback on how you think the video is.
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: angelsandair on April 03, 2008, 05:15:25 PM
no feedback?
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: zoozoo on April 03, 2008, 05:42:45 PM
want attention?
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: DPQ5 on April 03, 2008, 08:22:36 PM
it ok i guess, song reminds me og savingprivate ryan
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: angelsandair on April 03, 2008, 10:28:43 PM
thats the thing, but I wanna see what people actually think about it, see if it's too jerky with the camera shots.. etc. Thats why I'm using photobucket instead of something like mediafire.  :aok
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: BMathis on April 04, 2008, 02:25:00 AM
Tooting your own horn with that title isn't the greatest of ideas... [To be frank] It sounds a bit arrogant.

Good song, but your film is not telling a story. With a song like that, you should try to focus on a story line. It will help give your audience a sence of what you're trying to portray.


Change the Thread title next time... you threw this together in an hour, with half a song... Do you think "Wow, this is good"?

I'm just being honest angel, impression management is something I know a little bit about. If you cross the preverbial line in something as simple as a title that contradicts your entire thread (movie), nobody is gonna give you the time of day.

Keep working at it bud, you'll only get better.



EDIT:
Wow, it must be late. Sorry to be so blunt, no offense ofcourse.
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: angelsandair on April 04, 2008, 05:04:29 PM
oh no, its just a quick one I threw together, but I was suprised on how good it was. I'm remaking it with the whole song.  I'm working on it right now, so far I've spent about a day and a half on it finding the right stuff and recording things in the MA and the DA.
It's gonna probably take about a week. The entire song is like 7 minutes long. But I may use The Patriot's theme song.  :salute

P.S. Anyone else think the camera shots were a bit too jerky?


and Bmathis, with the "wow this is good" I personally really like it. I just need to add things to it. thats all.
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: zoozoo on April 04, 2008, 05:36:46 PM
yeah a bit jerky in some parts
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: angelsandair on April 04, 2008, 06:00:39 PM
That's what I was thinking. I've been slowing it down a bit on the full version. It's gonna be good.
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: angelsandair on April 05, 2008, 02:49:21 AM
P.S. I'm about to finish the real thing I got great film from H338 and CMustard. (Srry what I said to ya mustard, you just shouldn't be disrespecting any friend of mine like that  :salute )
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: SuBWaYCH on April 07, 2008, 10:15:55 PM
Quote from: zoozoo on April 03, 2008, 05:42:45 PM
want attention?

of all people, you should say that.
 :rolleyes:

Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: Denholm on April 08, 2008, 12:02:47 PM
 :lol
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: EskimoJoe on April 08, 2008, 11:42:13 PM
Quote from: Denholm on April 08, 2008, 12:02:47 PM
:lol
:lol
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: Denholm on April 09, 2008, 11:04:35 AM
Quote from: EskimoJoe on April 08, 2008, 11:42:13 PM
:lol
:confused:
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: weazely on April 09, 2008, 12:02:30 PM
Quote from: zoozoo on April 04, 2008, 05:36:46 PM
yeah a bit jerky in some parts

ZooZoo now the film expert?
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: Denholm on April 09, 2008, 12:10:25 PM
No, he recently earned a degree in psychology and he is testing his theory of, "Tell them what they want to hear, and they will admit how horrible they really are."

Note: This is a joke, not an opinion.
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: ATC1 on April 10, 2008, 05:54:27 PM
Great combination of movie and patriotic music, liked... :salute
Title: Re: Wow, this is good
Post by: Yossarian on April 10, 2008, 06:36:43 PM
On the first bit of text, it should be "...a requiem fitting..." instead of "requem" as it is now.

Otherwise, it looks great - keep up the good work!

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Yossarian