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General Forums => Custom Skins => Topic started by: VonMessa on April 07, 2008, 11:22:46 AM
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Werknummer - 211132
Coded "Black 4" of II/JG11
(http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff107/tymekeepyr/ahss12.jpg)
(http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff107/tymekeepyr/ahss11.jpg)
(http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff107/tymekeepyr/ahss7-1.jpg)
(http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff107/tymekeepyr/ahss5.jpg)
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- Your dirt pattern on the underside (centre of fuselage) is too segmented. You need to match the wing-root dirt with the dirt of the corresponding area of the lower fuselage.
- Prop spinner has a line of rivets that appear too bright.
- Your fuselage camo pattern is very odd. Have you got a reference such an intricate pattern? The green on the MG bulges looks out of place.
- What RLM colours is that supposed to be? The Green and Brown look a tiny bit off to me (though colour is a very personal interpretation... particularly on late war Luftwaffe aircraft)
Other than those details I look forward to fly this skin. Good work.
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oooooooooo...
shiny..........
:O
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Looking good Von! :aok
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Pretty sweet VM! :aok
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Thanks guys. I've had the flu so I'm sorry I haven't replied. Been mostly in bed for 3 days. :O
I'm gonna take things to heart and try to clean her up a bit by making her dirtier. :rock