Aces High Bulletin Board
General Forums => Films and Screenshots => Topic started by: flatiron1 on November 14, 2008, 04:53:14 PM
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best quality
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yelj2ywdgyi
or youtube version
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zyYmruZigT0
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So what do you guys think? How can I improve my movie?
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What do you want the viewer to remember about your film?
The answer lies in your film and not in your words.
After watching your film, I only remember the song and Lucy.
You put a great effort into making the film, but lack the storyline.
You built a great house, but with no foundation.
Some advice for your editing:
The frog says, "when relocating a cemetary, don't move the headstones, unless your going to move the bodies as well."
:uhoh
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I know it made me wanna fly a Mustang. :aok
Wasn't the best film but was certainly well put together and organized.
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Ah yes...Lucy. We kind of adopted her as she has superb structural integrity.....
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Thanks for the input Kermit. Well the the thing I was wanting to portray (storyine) and have folks remember is that the 353rd is a organized, multi role, stable fun loving squad that is always accepting new members.
If you would please expand on the comment about the editing and the tombstones. I am not sure what that means.
The reason I want some input is that the movie will be a evolving effort as the group moves forward so I will be looking to improve it with time.
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whew thought I had lost my movie when I had to reinstall my Op system. Thankfully by saving it to media fire I was able to retrieve it for any future updates.
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Always a good thing. I had to do the same with some AC3D export/import tools, as I'm too unreliable to remember to back them up. :D