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General Forums => The O' Club => Topic started by: ink on June 11, 2010, 02:32:11 PM
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check it out just put it together a couple days ago, figured it was about time to set one up.
what do you guys think?
any constructive criticism would be appreciated, you know if ya see something that does not sound right or could be worded better, I am a horrible writer :cry
if your not to busy sign the quest book
enjoy some zeppelin while you are at it:-)
http://www.fieldsofink.com
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Nice job Ink.
Try this for your intro:
Thank you for visiting Fields of Ink.
Fields of Ink is focused on providing high-quality custom freehand tattoo's.
The owner/artist, Paul Fields has been tattooing since 1988. With 22 years of experience bringing peoples ideas to life with ink, my passion is my work. I do not want to put tattoos on everyone, I prefer to work with those who want a "Paul Fields" original work. I do all styles of tattooing. If you are the type who needs to look at "wall flash"- the designs other tattoo shops buy for use, then this is not the shop for you. The only things you will find displayed on the walls are my personal artwork, tattoos, drawings and paintings. Bring an idea with you or choose something I have done in the past, and we will work together to make it real for you.
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Thanks for visiting!
Fields of Ink is focused on providing high-quality Custom Freehand Tattoo's.
Paul Fields Owner/operator has been Tattooing since 1988,. He first picked up the Tattoo machine at a young 18 years of age, Now in his prime at 40, He has 22 years of Tattooing ink into people's skin., his Passion is his work,. He knows he can not please every one, so if you are the type who needs to look at "wall flash," ya know- the designs Tattoo shops buy on line, well we are not the shop for you,. The only thing you will find on these walls are Paul's personal artwork, his drawings and Paintings.
Paul does not want to Tattoo everybody, he wants to Tattoo those who want a "Paul Fields" tattoo, his specialty is...well he has no one specialty, he does all styles of Tattooing, his specialty is bringing someone's idea to life.
So bring your idea's to Paul and sit back and enjoy the fact that NO one will have your tattoo, it was designed specifically for you.
Just starting to look through it, so this is the first input I have. I might have more later, but possibly not. I really love that you don't do flash. That just bumped you up several points in my estimation! The work is really nice too!
So you've got a few apostrophes in places where they shouldn't be, and are missing a couple where you should have them. The superfluous ones are in red, missing ones in blue. There are also a few caps in places that seemed odd to me, but I left them alone as you might have wanted them there for your own reasons.
I like Gyrene's paragraph also, but I'd take the apostrophe out of the first word tattoos in it as well.
Once again, great work man.
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Nice job Ink. I would like P-38's on my face hands and neck. Think you could pull that off? :D
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:aok
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Nice job Ink. I would like P-38's on my face hands and neck. Think you could pull that off? :D
:rofl :rofl
smartarse
Nice job Ink.
Try this for your intro:
Thank you for visiting Fields of Ink.
Fields of Ink is focused on providing high-quality custom freehand tattoo's.
The owner/artist, Paul Fields has been tattooing since 1988. With 22 years of experience bringing peoples ideas to life with ink, my passion is my work. I do not want to put tattoos on everyone, I prefer to work with those who want a "Paul Fields" original work. I do all styles of tattooing. If you are the type who needs to look at "wall flash"- the designs other tattoo shops buy for use, then this is not the shop for you. The only things you will find displayed on the walls are my personal artwork, tattoos, drawings and paintings. Bring an idea with you or choose something I have done in the past, and we will work together to make it real for you.
Thanx I will re do it :aok this does sound better :aok
Just starting to look through it, so this is the first input I have. I might have more later, but possibly not. I really love that you don't do flash. That just bumped you up several points in my estimation! The work is really nice too!
So you've got a few apostrophes in places where they shouldn't be, and are missing a couple where you should have them. The superfluous ones are in red, missing ones in blue. There are also a few caps in places that seemed odd to me, but I left them alone as you might have wanted them there for your own reasons.
I like Gyrene's paragraph also, but I'd take the apostrophe out of the first word tattoos in it as well.
Once again, great work man.
ya I have hated "flash" since the beginning, totally against what I feel a Tattoo is.
Thanx I will get those pesky apostrophes where they belong :D
thanx guys for your words.
believe it or not I appreciate them very much :salute
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Those wild life ones are awesome, ink.