Aces High Bulletin Board
General Forums => Films and Screenshots => Topic started by: papjohns on September 04, 2010, 09:58:24 AM
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uocrUm4wzvI
Inspired by Lepape's ueber video; nowhere near as good but was still fun to make. Don't forget to watch it in HD vice the crapp 240 option.
Note: I know the skin changes, I know the first combat scene is way too long, I know it's not even remotely as well done as most others.
Papa
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I liked it man. I love that skin too, it's the one I use most of the time. Excellent shooting in there too, great music. Good work!
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Not bad. I like it.
Some contructive criticisim if I may:
1) Shot's were too long. rule of thumb, Longest shot should be 8 seconds. Average shot should be about 2.75 +/- .75 seconds.
2) The time between "Dedicated to the..." and "the Kurfuerst" is 5 seconds. Way too long. The dramatic pause should only be .75 to 1.5 seconds. Otherwise I've fogotten what I'm waiting for and the pay-off is lost.
3) Always make sure there is something happening. The kill shot at 3:53 for instance. It takes too long for the enemy plane to slide into view. Some externals of the overshoot before switching into the cockpit would help.
4) Try some different camera angels. Look at older films from Niros and Lepape's for insperation. Heck. I'm still looking through old footage from this forum to see what I can find for insperation.
Most important. Dont stop! I looked at some of Niros old films and they didn't start out awesome, he got that way through doing several projects.
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Nice video. :aok
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yea really cool work!!!!!
course now im feeling really used!!!!!!!! you didnt even once show me in you film although you used me to bait in all those easy pick/kills for you!!!!
you didnt even list me in the credots as bestboy!!!!!
you promised to give me my props!!!! thats it im suing!! youll be hearing from my attorney (Grizz) the next time you dare to venture into the MA's! expect to get served!!!!!!!
oh and in case you need one i will be baiting dweebs in the MA's later this evening, let me know if you need a MASTER BAITER!!!!!!
:banana: :banana: :banana:
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Nice video but what is up at 1:15? It looks like A20 and NIK clued together or something :huh
(not critizing by any means, just observation)