Author Topic: Fear Hell Niño! (Read 464 times)

Ack-Ack · « **on:** August 17, 2004, 08:45:36 PM »

A scientific essay on El Niño, please discuss amongst yourselves.

El Niño, A Comprehensive Study in Weather Patterns

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Lizking · « **Reply #1 on:** August 17, 2004, 08:52:05 PM »

Typical "b" level essay from a public school.

Gunslinger · « **Reply #2 on:** August 17, 2004, 08:55:55 PM »

"like all things spanish, it is dangerous."

that's funny ackack:rofl

Ack-Ack · « **Reply #3 on:** August 17, 2004, 09:07:04 PM »

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Originally posted by Lizking
Typical "b" level essay from a public school.

You really want to see a "B" level essay?

The Biography of Walt Whitman

Pay special attention to the teacher's comments on the bottom of the paper after you read the essay.

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AWMac · « **Reply #4 on:** August 17, 2004, 09:11:49 PM »

I've had worse Enchiladas...

vorticon · « **Reply #5 on:** August 17, 2004, 09:19:11 PM »

LOL...

United · « **Reply #6 on:** August 17, 2004, 09:29:40 PM »

The best part is that the kid who wrote the second essay is in honors english.

Lizking · « **Reply #7 on:** August 17, 2004, 10:00:49 PM »

Not bad, he made a couple of technical errors, but I would give that a real B, at least, for Writing Skills. However, for content, I would give him an "(A)" but he would have still have to do a real bio on a poet to get it.

Gunslinger · « **Reply #8 on:** August 17, 2004, 10:15:15 PM »

you guys are easy. He gets a b for making me laught but as far as a paper goes this is a D- only if it meets the minimum word requirements.

Saurdaukar · « **Reply #9 on:** August 18, 2004, 12:17:01 AM »