Yah looks better close up, but still like black lines. .. try bringing the highlight of the panellines ... uh make it brighter and the black lines make the a lil more transparent , , , also ., try adding abit of detail to the paint job,
i.e. some tones so the white is just a tad more grey,,, so that you can actualy see the white highlight from the panels on them once you bring that up.
The rivits look pretty good. . . thats one thing i haven't done on my texture yet, , , im not sure if I will, , , they look good close up but from a distance ,,, depending on the plane some are Unraped better than others,,,, they look really busy and kind of distract from the actual texture, , kind of starts to look like a grid patern , ,, hmmm gonna have to think about that one.
Well keep it up almost there.
MonkeyMeat