Author Topic: my first film (Read 378 times)

weazely · « **on:** November 22, 2006, 04:20:08 PM »

http://www.speedyshare.com/884696736.html
hope u like it

evenhaim · « **Reply #1 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:27:37 PM »

constructive critiscm;
- lose the mouse
- music selsction 2/10 not so good by my taste most people dont appreciate that much cursing as old as i may sound im only 17 lol
-lose the icons as well
all these tips make for a better film

but otherwise was good
actual footage sans music and mouse etc recieves a 8/10

lambo31 · « **Reply #2 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:32:08 PM »

Sorry Weazely, I couldn't handle more than 15 seconds of the music before I had to close it. I guess that's due to getting old.................

Lambo

weazely · « **Reply #3 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:48:10 PM »

ya i just liked how it went with the film

evenhaim · « **Reply #4 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:48:13 PM »

yep that was my main point music is ehh ;(

weazely · « **Reply #5 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:49:24 PM »

did u like the parts wer i let them up :/

weazely · « **Reply #6 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:50:25 PM »

im goingto make another one with good music

evenhaim · « **Reply #7 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:50:31 PM »

yah that was cool

if u change music on film would make it 10x better though

evenhaim · « **Reply #8 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:51:07 PM »

weazely · « **Reply #9 on:** November 22, 2006, 05:54:45 PM »

doing that right now

eilif · « **Reply #10 on:** November 22, 2006, 08:34:02 PM »

It would be pretty good if it were not for the enoying mouse moving all over the place.

SkyRock · « **Reply #11 on:** November 23, 2006, 12:49:20 AM »

Well I am glad to see you doing what you are doing with working on film stuff. follow the advice about getting rid of distractive things and then film an arial combat manuver that is interesting. The music has to accentuate the action.

weazely · « **Reply #12 on:** November 23, 2006, 12:18:03 PM »

okedoke

Golfer · « **Reply #13 on:** November 23, 2006, 01:34:12 PM »

Right click, Save as (IE works best for this and i don't know why)

80mb

try something like this. Take meat and potatoes 'stuff' and exactly like they say...take the time to make the music accent the video. That stuff (noise?) you call music isn't music thats in the movie as it is. Find something new and less...whatever that is.

This isn't a "final copy" of the video but it's coming along.

Surf35 in the Racing Forums has a great collection of videos that are really done quite well. Maybe take a few notes on those.