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Offline the Lazy ace

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1 cool poem!
« on: March 18, 2006, 11:34:57 AM »
>   THE FINAL INSPECTION
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>   The Marine stood and faced God,
>   Which must always come to pass.
>   He hoped his shoes were shining,
>   Just as brightly as his brass.
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>   "Step forward now, you! Marine,
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>   How shall I deal with you?
>   Have you always turned the other cheek?
>   To My Church have you been true?"
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>   The Marine squared his shoulders and said,
>   "No, Lord, I guess I ain't.
>   Because those of us who carry guns,
>   Can't always be a saint
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>   I've had to work most Sundays,
>   And at times my talk was tough.
>   And sometimes I've been violent,
>   Because the world is awfully rough.
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>   But, I never took a penny,
>   That wasn't mine to keep...
>   Though I worked a lot of overtime,
>   When the bills got just too steep..
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>   And I never passed a cry for help,
>   Though at times I shook with fear.
>   And sometimes, God, forgive me,
>   I've wept unmanly tears.
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>   I know I don't deserve a place,
>   Among the people here.
>   They never wanted me around,
>   Except to calm their fears.
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>   If you've a place for me here, Lord,
>   It needn't be so grand.
>   I never expected or had too much,
>   But if you don't, I'll understand."
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>   There was a silence all around the throne,
>   Where the saints had often trod.
>   As the Marine waited quietly,
>   For the judgment of his God.
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>   "Step forward now, Marine,
>   You've borne your burdens well.
>   Walk peacefully on Heaven's streets,
>   You've done your time in Hell."

How do u like it.

Offline Kermit de frog

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1 cool poem!
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2006, 02:08:41 PM »
That's good.

I like it.:aok
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Offline FiLtH

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1 cool poem!
« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2006, 08:47:25 AM »
Good..but the ending is alot like another poem along the same lines.

~AoM~