353rd Fighter Group recruiting video

[flatiron1]

best quality

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yelj2ywdgyi


or youtube version

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zyYmruZigT0

[flatiron1]

So what do you guys think? How can I improve my movie?

[Kermit de frog]

What do you want the viewer to remember about your film?


The answer lies in your film and not in your words.
After watching your film, I only remember the song and Lucy.

You put a great effort into making the film, but lack the storyline.
You built a great house, but with no foundation.

Some advice for your editing:
The frog says, "when relocating a cemetary, don't move the headstones, unless your going to move the bodies as well."
 

[SgtPappy]

I know it made me wanna fly a Mustang.   

Wasn't the best film but was certainly well put together and organized.

[apcampbell]

Ah yes...Lucy. We kind of adopted her as she has superb structural integrity.....

[flatiron1]

Thanks for the input Kermit. Well the the thing I was wanting to portray (storyine) and have folks remember is  that the 353rd is a organized, multi role, stable fun loving squad that is always accepting new members.

If you would please expand on the comment about the editing and the tombstones. I am not sure what that means.


The reason I want  some input is that the movie will be a evolving effort as the group moves forward so I will be looking to improve  it with time.

[flatiron1]

whew thought I had lost my movie when I had to reinstall my Op system. Thankfully by saving it to media fire I was able to retrieve it for any future updates.

[Denholm]

Always a good thing. I had to do the same with some AC3D export/import tools, as I'm too unreliable to remember to back them up.