Need some logo help.

[weazely]

Ive been working on this and I have this feeling somthing is missing so... give some ideas!

[Spikes]

Well personally, unless you were thinking of adding stuff, too much black around the edge. Hard to read the fonts as well, just a little.

[weazely]

It will be going on a School T-Shirt. sooo i will enlarge the text and such

[AWwrgwy]

It's a bit harsh on the eyes too.

But, in my case, I've discovered the old saying, "if it's too loud, you're too old" is true.


wrongway

[1pLUs44]

+1 on it being too harsh, make the letters bigger, and maybe a lighter background.

[Motherland]

How is it harsh? The contrast?

[weazely]

I can understand the harsh part,  the colors are hard on the eyes because the yellow came out way lighter than I was expecting.

[AWwrgwy]

Yes, a bit harsh on the Yellow/Black contrast.  At first glance, the "Advanced" looks like a yellow blob to me.  Maybe that's a good thing, in that you have to look twice to figure out what it says.  But, if you want that "FLASH" of recognition, it's a bad thing.

I like contrasting colors though.  I noticed some web page yesterday that was a bright light blue with white lettering and, when I left that page and went to a different one, the blue/white was still burned into my eyes.  One of those "ghost" images.


wrongway

[TUK]

Just my opinion. I like the colors. Perhaps make the text a lil bit bigger. Then slip some black inside the A's aand E.  

[weazely]

Yes, a bit harsh on the Yellow/Black contrast.  At first glance, the "Advanced" looks like a yellow blob to me.  Maybe that's a good thing, in that you have to look twice to figure out what it says.  But, if you want that "FLASH" of recognition, it's a bad thing.

I like contrasting colors though.  I noticed some web page yesterday that was a bright light blue with white lettering and, when I left that page and went to a different one, the blue/white was still burned into my eyes.  One of those "ghost" images.


wrongway

Ya some colors/ shades of colors really dont need to be next to each other lol...  The only reason for the gold and white is school colors but Im working on the colors right now.

TuK i love that black of AE!!!!