Author Topic: A song (Read 171 times)

NUKE · « **on:** October 19, 2005, 10:46:56 PM »

I am working on the lyrics to a song that I had recorded a year ago.

working title: Listen to me

Listen, I'm a big loser with a big fat mouth
I'm only human and can live without
Anything larger than I want to see
Listen to me

music and vocals I'm pretty good at, lyrics I'm not s good at.....but I have a direction for this one.

Recorded 2 acoustics and a scratch drum track about a year ago and just played it back today. I'd love to hook up with somebody like Nash and get some help on this one. I think the music is cool, if I might be so bold.

Nash · « **Reply #1 on:** October 19, 2005, 10:52:59 PM »

Fire me an mp3.

I'd be happy to give it a listen.

But I'm brutal about it... Friends, family, whoever... If it sucks, you better be prepared for me to say how.

NUKE · « **Reply #2 on:** October 19, 2005, 10:54:07 PM »

me too. But I don't suck.

Nash · « **Reply #3 on:** October 19, 2005, 10:55:43 PM »

Cool - I fixed my email thingy in the profile (on account of you pointing the problem out).

NUKE · « **Reply #4 on:** October 19, 2005, 10:59:59 PM »

cool Nash. I'll send you the demo, which is through 2 verses. I have the whole song layed out and recorded in a different tempo ( way different) and feel I have a solid arangment. I think I mostly need lyric help.

Give me a few days though, as I have to screw with the Sonic file and mix it to mp3.

Nash · « **Reply #5 on:** October 19, 2005, 11:01:23 PM »

This aint gonna be like one of your models is it?

Just send the raw thing - god knows I've heard thousands of them, and can listen past it.

NUKE · « **Reply #6 on:** October 19, 2005, 11:03:38 PM »

okay...lol, I'll give you thr raw thing. If you are like me, you'll know if it has potential even from that.