Feedback on a letter.

[WldThing]

Can someone give me some feedback on a letter I wrote not too long ago? Some things that could be changed, etc..

Thanks!

Dear Julia 01/17/2006


How are you? I’m doing fine. When I last saw you it was that faithful morning on the most glorious day two years ago. Since then much has changed, I’ve bought a new house, a new car, and particularly a new wardrobe. Lately I have given a lot of thought on our relationship, I know we’ve struggled much, had a few rough patches but always end up with the utmost intention.


While our love has flourished into what is now a commendable relationship I must say with great pleasure that I have become restless at the thought of meeting you once more. Thru our various and sometimes scarce conversations on the phone I have begun to notice that we have become distant from where we were once. My feelings for you have not changed; in fact I have become even more infatuated with your personality. I believe that a woman of your stature deserves to occupy every moment of my life. Without you it seems life is meaningless, hollow, and empty with a deep pit of regret that I have not written this letter sooner. I remember the first time I laid my eyes on you, your ocean blue eyes protruding my lifeless body and enticing that fire that burned out long time ago. I wish to feel this way once more, and I truly believe you are the only woman that is able to accomplish this.


I’ve felt this way about you for a long time, but have been foolish enough to conceal my true intentions for the fact of being hurt once more. With this in mind I hope you will take these words of passion into consideration and will want to see me too. I will travel half way across the world to be with you, even sell these materialistic possessions if you allow me. Truly I do hope you feel the same way about me as I do about you, so on this note I shall be eagerly waiting for you to write to me as soon as you can.


Love always

[Edbert]

Ummmm....get your nads outta whatever jar she keeps them in and don't let her have them again?

[midnight Target]

your ocean blue eyes protruding my lifeless body and enticing that fire that burned out long time ago.

Protruding?

I do not think it means what you think it means....

[Airscrew]

WildThing, are you stalking Julie Roberts again???  

[DipStick]

Sounds like you need to get laid..... maybe for the 1st time?

[AKS\/\/ulfe]

SOB is the master of love letters. You should wait for his opinion.

He's also the master of restraining orders.
-SW

[AWMac]

Dear Wldthing,

If you say these feelings are to be true then sell all your Worldly possessions and send all the money to MacMAW. Once you have done this I will come and pick you up.

Always Yours,

Julia

[AWMac]

C'mon bite on it!!!!!

[WldThing]

LOL..

It's not a real love letter.. But thanks for making me look like a ***** whipped fool

[Edbert]

Originally posted by WldThing
But thanks for making me look like a ***** whipped fool

Ummmm..."WE" didn't post that..."YOU" did.

I just noticed your sig too...consider that pining drivel as the loss of weakness then and move on

[AWMac]

Sooooo your not gonna sell all your Worldly crap and send me...errr MacMAW the money?



Mac.....no I mean Julia

[Furball]

QUICK JULIA! RUN AWAY BEFORE YOU SEE HIS LETTER!!!!!

no offence mr.thing, but that makes you sound like a sissy.

[Ripsnort]

I will travel half way across the world to be with you, even sell these materialistic possessions if you allow me.

If she allows?

Just take things in hand manually....

[Big G]

Originally posted by WldThing
Can someone give me some feedback on a letter I wrote not too long ago? Some things that could be changed, etc..

Thanks!

Dear Julia 01/17/2006


How are you? I’m doing fine. When I last saw you it was that faithful morning on the most glorious day two years ago. Since then much has changed, I’ve bought a new house, a new car, and particularly a new wardrobe. Lately I have given a lot of thought on our relationship, I know we’ve struggled much, had a few rough patches but always end up with the utmost intention.


While our love has flourished into what is now a commendable relationship I must say with great pleasure that I have become restless at the thought of meeting you once more. Thru our various and sometimes scarce conversations on the phone I have begun to notice that we have become distant from where we were once. My feelings for you have not changed; in fact I have become even more infatuated with your personality. I believe that a woman of your stature deserves to occupy every moment of my life. Without you it seems life is meaningless, hollow, and empty with a deep pit of regret that I have not written this letter sooner. I remember the first time I laid my eyes on you, your ocean blue eyes protruding my lifeless body and enticing that fire that burned out long time ago. I wish to feel this way once more, and I truly believe you are the only woman that is able to accomplish this.


I’ve felt this way about you for a long time, but have been foolish enough to conceal my true intentions for the fact of being hurt once more. With this in mind I hope you will take these words of passion into consideration and will want to see me too. I will travel half way across the world to be with you, even sell these materialistic possessions if you allow me. Truly I do hope you feel the same way about me as I do about you, so on this note I shall be eagerly waiting for you to write to me as soon as you can.


Love always

Thorw it in the trash, forget about her, take  200 bucks outa the ATM, go down to Macys and get some decent clothes, get a haircut and start going to upscale bars with live music and start picking up chicks, after the first couple you'll be asking " Julia who?"

[Pooh21]

Originally posted by Ripsnort
If she allows?

Just take things in hand manually....

chloroform+trunk?