drewgordon, if that's your film and you're introducing it to the community you should've started a separate thread. However, very nice camera work! I strongly believe that you could've edited the film so there was less footage of the trip to the airfield and less footage of the actual fight. Sometimes just a good action packed clip is better than a long story of what happened on the trip to the airfield and how the event played out once you arrived.
Other than that, very nice. And a tip for the future, video sites such as YouTube and Google Video require you to put the film on a codec which really chokes the quality. Perhaps the next video you make you can place it on DivX such as this film right here:
http://stage6.divx.com/user/Schwert/video/1444234/AcesHighII-PV