I suppose I'm the action type who enjoys a good fast steady soundtrack that can be synchronized to plenty of action shots with lots of angles. This didn't work too well for me yet I must admit that it was surprising to see a movie maker present film clips of his own downfall instead of just his superiority.
Some hints for the future, try to get more angles and spend less time showing the takeoff, formation and special tricks you perform while in the formation. Other than that, very nice work.