Some of those film shots were awesome!
Very nice job for just a few hours of work.
I feel this one would be better with more editing. Maybe make it shorter. Also, try to give the audience more clues as to what is going on. Maybe a few more internal views for pilot POV would have made it easier to follow the fight. The low audio and slow tempo of the film can sometimes dull the mind and the audience will not concentrate as much and will miss some of the smaller details. Trying to follow along was a bit hard at times in the middle of the film.
I did like the way you transitioned to the text parts. Especially when the aircraft approaches the camera, the screen goes black and then text appears. That was cool.
That song was a tough one to work with. You pulled it off.
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Hope you got what great experience from the AHFV.