I agree with rogerdee. A VERY good first attempt! You nailed the quality, knew what you wanted to put together, and had a good eye for the camera. I do have a few suggestions though to help you improve the, "immersion" factor of your films. First, try experimenting with Pan mode as opposed to Snap mode in the F5 camera. Secondly-as mentioned above-try out the camera shots. You have a very good eye for the camera angles and in which order to display the shots, you could work miracles with the camera shots feature. Thirdly, add sound effects to your film. While this increases the amount of time required to produce a film, it greatly increases the realism of your film.
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very good first attempt.

Please do come back! And make it soon, or I'll find you.