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Offline LYNX

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Re: I wrote another story ...critique please
« Reply #15 on: December 01, 2009, 03:13:14 AM »
Morrisons....buy one get 2 free...every little helps.

Actually it looks like they had a server burp...there's lots of other double posts  :frown:
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Re: I wrote another story ...critique please
« Reply #16 on: December 01, 2009, 07:42:16 AM »
Awesome story LYNX, well done. :aok   I too enjoyed the A-Team theme reference, although I started humming Mission Impossible instead.

Did you ever get your coffee started?
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Re: I wrote another story ...critique please
« Reply #17 on: December 01, 2009, 05:33:53 PM »
Thanks Dragon  glad you liked it.  Yep...got me coffee and a telling off from the Mrs for not going to hospital ....she loves me.   :D
 
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