Your film was great for first time. But try to keep the time below 5 minutes as some people get boered to easily
to do this concentrate you film into 8 second shots and refilm with fraps at x51 speed in aces filmviewer as when you take the film shot onto sony vegas you can then speed up the clip by double the original speed thus allowing for a more faster feel to th action.
Search these forums for film making tutorials they are here and i used them to help me and found my films where turning out better.
I cant remember who did the film making tutorial but i shall try and find it for you or someone else shall tell you
But in all good film great sound track
PS in filmviewer double click on the other players name and you jump to his plane. to do this its in the box on the right just double click his name and pow you in his cockpit
Adds more film shots aswell
BulletVI