Quick Opinion?

[Blinky]

Wondering if I could get a quick opinion / guidance on film of a fight I just had. 
The easiest way is if you just have discord, that way I can stream the film easily and possibly talk about it. 

I would have posted in training / help but as of eyeballing TA and forum activity I thought I'd have better luck here.

 

[Trev95]

Wondering if I could get a quick opinion / guidance on film of a fight I just had. 
The easiest way is if you just have discord, that way I can stream the film easily and possibly talk about it. 

I would have posted in training / help but as of eyeballing TA and forum activity I thought I'd have better luck here.

 

If you PM me your info I can try to help if I can.

[Blinky]

Does discord work for you? If so I will send a invite when I get home. Any method really works for me, just a rather large film. (not too long)

I just need input on where exactly I went wrong so I can focus that aspect and make some changes to my style,

I'm having trouble against energy fighters (as in I'm quite keen on defensive flying 109's only usually) and I really struggle against a skilled SPIXTEEN pilot for instance.

That's not necessarily what's happening in the video but I feel that's where it roots.

Thanks!