A pretty good letter overall, but on a couple of points....the second paragraph talks about Kerry statements about dragging the war into the politics--you might want to look here
http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-news/1071592/postsfor the complete text--your letter uses phrases together and without context....and the third paragraph, well, the Winter Soldier investigation was not Jane Fonda's. And if you read the text of the Winter Soldier Investigation here
http://lists.village.virginia.edu/sixties/HTML_docs/Resources/Primary/Winter_Soldier/WS_entry.html...and you will find that Kerry was describing what other soldiers were saying--he was not accusing.
The fourth paragraph wasn't bad, except are you sure you want to bring up the Collier International thing? Kerry may have done his cousin a favor, but Cheney OWNS Haliburton, his stock in a trust fund to the contrary, with hundreds of millions of dollars in sole source contract awards this year.
Fifth paragraph was OK, too, but again the rebuttal will be Bush: more vacation days in his term of office than any President EVER. And, you really don't want them scrutinizing his Governor of Texas time either....
And as to the sixth paragraph--good point--it'll be interesting to see how he wriggles out of it.....
I mean, if you're going to hammer the guy, at least get it right.
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