Nice work Dlitz!
If I might add or give you an Idea for your next one?
I noticed a few parts where the in game sound and the music became interlaced and it was a little tough sometimes to make out either. (it was still cool though).
I would try fading in and out between sounds, from in game to the music for some certain points.
Like, when you have a "high" point in fight, bring back the music and bring up the in game sound. Then when you have a high point in the music, bring that forward and increase its db. Also timing is everything with it, as you may very well know. It helps to add sort of an "emotional" effect to it. (that is timing between music highs/lows and film highs/lows. So you'll just have to play with it to see what works with the film and the music to make it fit
I know Sony Vegas is very expensive, but if you're somewhat serious about making movies then its well worth the extra cost. If one day you get the urge to splurge, you wont regret it. Its an awsome program and there are absolutly tons of forums filled with information on how to use it if you get stuck and need help.
keep up the good work!
Morph