One of the better films Ive seen. I think that with some more traditional footage it would easily be in the top 5. I do like a somewhat active camera, or at least a sence of speed and motion that is lacking in SO many of the films I see. I think youve got that feeling of raw grit in many of the shots.
Some of the shots feel a little labored, as if you force more into them than needed with super fast cuts and cut backs, but the imaged you used were fairly ordinary (ie: the 26-30 second clip).
A few of the pan shots looked like time was froze, and the camera was moving, but to me it felt like that wasnt the case (or at least the intention), and so it felt a bit 'fake' for what its worth.
PLEASE keep in mind I dont comment on films I dont like (Rule of Thumper), so while Ive said things I didnt like, its only my silly opinion, but overal, I am very impressed.....if you look, I dont comment on many films (even some of the pretty good ones), your film shows a spark I think is indicative of true creative ability, and the willingness to spend time on the film to make it special.
