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Offline Stratocaster

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« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2005, 11:31:31 AM »
Is this your first attempt at this?

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« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2005, 12:30:10 PM »
well ... nice song .. but its totaly off the theme

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« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2005, 12:59:43 PM »
ya its my first attempt sorry for the song couldnt resist
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« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2005, 06:59:16 PM »
well how is it considering iv never done a moive b4
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« Reply #5 on: April 24, 2005, 08:08:41 PM »
Not bad.  I'm not going to criticize since the few times I have tried to make one I have never been happy with it and trashed it.  Some suggestions I would make though (things I saw in my own attepmts that I want to improve on)........

Try smoother transitions between the POV changes, where it looks like the plane is zooming past where you are sitting "filming" it, and rotating around the plane.  Also try to smooth the transitions between frame changes.  

I did like the pictures at the front, although again I think there should be a smoother segue from that into the movie.  Some text along the bottom, quotes of a speech or something would be a nice touch there.  

At the end, I think perhaps either the movie should have been stretched to the length of the song, or it should have been cut off at a more logical point and the volume fade out instead of just being cut off.  

Again though, I dont like my own attempts, I'm probably being overly critical and its just my opinion.  If you are happy with what you put out, thats all that matters.  Its your vision.  

Thanks for sharing.  :)