Very impressive golfer. Indeed.
Is that you're voice? Very fitting.
A few things.
I take it you dont own fraps. Try cutting out the fraps logo at the top. I dont know what editing program you are using so I can't tell you how to go about doing that. But in Sony Vegas you are able to do so. That I know.
The ONLY other gripe I have isnt with you're film its with the view system in the film viewer. For instance. You panned forward or to the rear of the C47. It stopped, started, and then stopped again.
Maybe, try to get that a bit more fluid like. Small things like that can really add to a film.
Also, I have a few very good clips of me attacking bomber missions. A few in a 262 and then some in a 109. Maybe a quick cut to something like that would be great. While making mention of ToD and some things it will offer.
The first clip seems to me to be a bit too long, with the P51. You make mention of bombers also but dont show them. Again, cutting to a big formation of bombers might be a great addition.
Man, with your voice over, i could really make a great commercial. hehe
