Author Topic: I Think Black 12 is done.. ready to submit (Read 1990 times)

JB73 · « **on:** May 30, 2005, 04:43:08 PM »

how's it look?

thebest1 · « **Reply #1 on:** May 30, 2005, 04:54:34 PM »

not reallydiggen the lighter wings cause its alil too much of a constant color idk i think maybe alil more work its comin along good tho

SkyChimp · « **Reply #2 on:** May 30, 2005, 10:19:10 PM »

The green is really throwing me off lol

Fix the green

Kweassa · « **Reply #3 on:** May 30, 2005, 10:47:06 PM »

Curious.

The quality of details seem to be a bit low to think that it is in 1024x1024 resolution.

TexMurphy · « **Reply #4 on:** May 31, 2005, 08:07:51 AM »

Fueselage.

Looks ok, especially the rear part but the front could use some weathering and oil effects. Especially the top greenest green looks way to clean and painted. Burn marks around the guns would be one thing to do.

Wings.

The wings really look... ummm odd... I think its partially due to the combination of metal and paint... the metal it self looks really more like grey paint...

Try adding a layer of cloud effect over the metal grey. Use the opticity to get a good blend.

Weather effects. Even metal gets weathered... The green on the wings doesnt really look weathered either.

The dirt from the engine that goes over the fuselage is clipped with a straight line at the wing. It should be on the wing as well if its right above it.

Keep up the good work.
Tex

JB73 · « **Reply #5 on:** May 31, 2005, 08:43:36 AM »

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Originally posted by Kweassa
Curious.

The quality of details seem to be a bit low to think that it is in 1024x1024 resolution.

i fly at 512, my system can't handle 1024, so the screen shots here are in 512

im guessing that's why not alot shows up in the screen shots

Tex, there is no metal on the wings, it is all paint. there are weathering effects over the whole plane, though not a ton over the cowl, only some gun residue, with the stretching and duplicated parts of the skin i can't make it look anything but real stupid, and funky.

the engine and cowl flaps have dirt, and some streaks. i can add more.

Howitzer · « **Reply #6 on:** May 31, 2005, 09:48:41 AM »

I'd hit it

Great Job 73!

JB73 · « **Reply #7 on:** May 31, 2005, 10:02:41 AM »

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Originally posted by Howitzer
I'd hit it

Great Job 73!

thanks!

anyone here fly 1024 textures? i'll email the bmp, and you can take soem screen shots, to show more detail?

i'd ask someone in my squad but noone i know in the squad has a system good enough to run 1024 textures lol

United · « **Reply #8 on:** May 31, 2005, 10:04:02 AM »

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Originally posted by JB73
thanks!

anyone here fly 1024 textures? i'll email the bmp, and you can take soem screen shots, to show more detail?

i'd ask someone in my squad but noone i know in the squad has a system good enough to run 1024 textures lol

If you can send it to me within 5 minutes, Ill do it right now.

If not, I'll get to it sometime tonight if you'd like.

bnicely(at)gmail.com

TexMurphy · « **Reply #9 on:** May 31, 2005, 10:17:03 AM »

JB73

I guess its the low detail that makes it so the weathering doesnt show that well. Since the wings are supposed to be painted then I guess they dont look wrong at all..

Tex

JB73 · « **Reply #10 on:** May 31, 2005, 10:50:03 AM »

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Originally posted by United
If you can send it to me within 5 minutes, Ill do it right now. If not, I'll get to it sometime tonight if you'd like.

bnicely(at)gmail.com

thanks.

i'm at work, so i can't send it until tonight when i get home (5pm CST) if that's cool

SkyChimp · « **Reply #11 on:** May 31, 2005, 12:17:02 PM »

o o o leme do it too

1024text with hi res pack all the time** 4aa on 1280x1024 res

SlapShot · « **Reply #12 on:** May 31, 2005, 03:07:57 PM »

Compared to the model profile that you posted in your other thread, alot of the colors do not match the profile.

The color on the side fuselage and tail, from what I can see, have a green tint to it. The model appears to be a very light brownish color.

The color on the top of the fuselage looks to be the right color but a tad bit too dark.

The colors between what is on the wing and the fuselage have a very definate line, where on the model, it appears to be a smooth blend.

The green on the cowl is just the wrong green. Where the guns are on the cowl, there is an indentation in the cowl for each gun. On the model, those indentations appear to have the same dark brown color as what is displayed on the top of the fuselage. This color could also be a result of the guns firing, but your rendition shows no brown at all.

I know that you are not allowed to show the Swaz, but on the model, there are some numbers above the Swaz, you don't have any.

United · « **Reply #13 on:** May 31, 2005, 05:09:38 PM »

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Originally posted by JB73
thanks.

i'm at work, so i can't send it until tonight when i get home (5pm CST) if that's cool

Im here waiting for it.

SkyChimp · « **Reply #14 on:** May 31, 2005, 05:20:52 PM »

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Originally posted by United
Im here waiting for it.

Me too :