Originally posted by Nomak
I really dont care for a "Training" film to be taken out of AH film viewer context. Cant see speeds.... distances (Sometimes) etc etc....
I found it to hard to see what was happening in the early part of the film. My feeling was that you used slower your speed to create a good snapshot, not really what I would consider an overshoot. On a good overshoot I want to see a con 200-400 yds dead six at a simular energy state then scrubbing speed and manuvering to get the con to squirt out in front. Again.... if I am misjudging I appoligize.... like I said I had a hard time reading what was happening.
On the flip side I thank you for taking the time to make and post this film!
Just calling it like I see it here..... no flame intended.
Dave
hey, no problem. i asked for constuctive criticism. i did say it was my first film tho:D. yeah, im still learning, so any advice is good advice. i do understand what your saying, its just so difficult to get it across when your trying to make a training film, that also looks good. i was just trying to show how you can use rolling to get behind a guy, instead of using your elevators (which i didnt have). of course none of this was helped by the jittery film viewer!

schatzi also picked up on the fact that there was no visible speed/distance data, which I need to learn to show better

this one also had a big problem, because i made it the first time, and it was far smoother, and looked far better. unfortunately, as i converted it into the film at the end of editing, it didnt work, and it deleted the file, so i had to start all over again, and it didnt come out right the second time round. anyway, ty for the advice, i'll try to keep it in mind with my next film.