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Offline Golfer

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« on: November 30, 2005, 05:13:44 PM »
So now that the deadline is here...show your cards!

Here is my entry for this go around.  Hopefully the large bounty this time around will bring out the best of the best.


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« Reply #1 on: November 30, 2005, 05:15:57 PM »
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« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2005, 05:16:33 PM »
Damn...that was fast!  Link fixed.  Trial and error still...someday I'll figure this out :)

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« Reply #3 on: November 30, 2005, 05:29:20 PM »
The 110-bit was nice (and different), but I would've liked a bit more of air-to-air combat in there. Oh well, I realize that there are limits to what you can fit in 30 sec. But it's the best one I've seen yet (although it's the only one so far ;)). edit: forgot to mention, the narrative was good.

I guess you have an uncompressed version of that one to send to HTC? IIRC they wanted something with a bigger resolution and uncompressed... :)
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« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2005, 05:33:05 PM »
"Ayeah"...even at 30 seconds on maximum uber setting it was something I can't send via any email I have.  If I won I'd have to burn it to a CD and overnight it to Grapevine.  The joys of dialup...

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« Reply #5 on: December 04, 2005, 06:02:41 PM »
:-Dropkick-:

Hyaaaahh!

C'mon...somebody had to make something.  The deadline passed and lets show the cards!

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« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2005, 08:51:01 AM »
Well, I liked it.

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« Reply #7 on: December 05, 2005, 08:12:26 PM »
ver1
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my 2 poor entries

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« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2005, 10:12:59 AM »
Golfer, I swear you sound like you have been doing commercial voice over's for years.  Well written and nicely done.  :aok

Holy cow Ramzey, that is spectacular footage and camera angles on those shots.  :O  I am downloading the second version right now.  Also, very nicely done.
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« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2005, 01:44:19 PM »
ramsey....thoes were awsome. music was cool:aok :aok
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« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2005, 03:38:01 PM »
Good job guys.

Ramsey, if you want some help with the english text let me know. It was a bit awkward.

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« Reply #11 on: December 06, 2005, 09:03:29 PM »
good video golfer..sounded like you were selling used auto parts on a local cable channel though :P come on down to HItech Creations..YEEEHAAA!

jk..very professional..needs more testosterone though :)

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« Reply #12 on: December 07, 2005, 03:39:55 PM »
Golfer, ramsey, great job! Golfer i gotta say your style might be better suited for other things, i think hitech probably wants ramseys kinda angle. Of the 2 ramsey versions i like the one withought text better, keeping it as visual as possible, its clear its a game, its clear whats going on, and its clear how to get it, all ya need! These days you dont really need to spell it out to the public because anyone who wants to play ah is probably already familiare with games.

Did you make that sound track ramsey? if not you cant use it unless its in public domain or you bought the rights for its use.
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