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Offline nirvana

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« on: April 10, 2006, 01:51:45 PM »
Umm well, let's start by saying i'm not Jimi Hendrix or Joe Satriani, anyway this is what i've recorded

http://www.purevolume.com/tightjeanjain

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Offline Yeager

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« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2006, 01:57:44 PM »
lol modern retro :aok

Maybe classic progressive modern retro with a lemon twist!

I would say your on the right track.  Invest in a nice midi synth with some digi drums, bass, and some techno sounds....you could probably get pretty freaky.....

btw, what program did you use?
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« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2006, 02:02:29 PM »
Long Drawn Out is bad.  All you are using is power chord on the same 2 strings it sounds like.  The effects just make it worse.  To me it sounds like you were using a phase shifter and wah wah + distortion.  I didn't like the moving from side to side thing.  Hope that help with that one

Chimes sound like mating whales.

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Anxiety attempt get a 8 out of 10.  Good job.

the last one i must say you did an excellenct on the guitar work but again the up down volume and left right effects just don't go.  But you did a good job tapping and muting.



Overall good job for a first few songs.  Wish mine where that good. :aok

Btw im not into techno much so.
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Offline nirvana

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« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2006, 02:15:03 PM »
I use a GNX4 and screw around with effects.  Then I put it through Nero wave editor to convert to MP3 and edit if I want.

Thanks for the input, I was happy with long drawn out for a few days but the ending is like it got chopped off with a meat cleaver.

Whales mating:lol :aok
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Offline FuBaR

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« Reply #4 on: April 12, 2006, 01:30:46 AM »
not sure I have listened to anything like this before, for that I gotta say at least you making an attempt at showing your passion for music. The music itself has some interesting beats and some attractive effects. You got some cool effects goin with your guitar and you should keep up the work and maybe you'll find a  a steady style for yourself.

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« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2006, 01:45:04 AM »
This music reminds me of Eraserhead.  Pretty cool but I have no idea what I'm listening to, it's way above my head :)
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Offline DiabloTX

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« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2006, 02:06:44 AM »
Errr, uh, well....it's different.
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