I can see where your headed with the film Reynolds...
I like the song (from enterprise IIRC ?) but If your film is not full of action you need to (like Kermit said), Tell a story... ( or in this case a bit more of the story)
Over all I think its a good effort It could use some polishing, but I can see a lot of potential in it...
One thing I would suggest is try using the chase view and adjust you distance slider all the way out and the zoom slider all the way in, this will allow you to get some interesting views...
Also if your in the chase view, try stopping the AH film viewer, looking back (use F8 to hold the view facing the rear), the view will catch up with the plane, once this happens starting you recorder (fraps ?) and then start the AH film viewer. You will get a nice smooth pass of your plane as it flys past the chase camera. Try it and you will see what I mean.
Later